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grammaire
Joined: 30 Jun 2007 Posts: 30
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Bonjour,
Can you please tell me if this paragraph is correct? I just started studying French.
Le garçon est malade et est mange/prendre sa médécine. Des enfants joue dehors aussi. Il a un lit, une table de nuit, des jouets sur le placher et une fenêtre grande dans la chambre.
I'm describing a picture and I'm trying to say "The boy is sick/ill and he is taking his medicine. Some kids are playing outside too. There is a bed, a night table, some toys on the floor, and a big window in the bedroom."
Merci boucoup |
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Sat Jun 30, 2007 6:04 pm
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Marcus
Joined: 31 Mar 2006 Posts: 121 Location: Lyon VII
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Hi...
| Quote: | | Le garçon est malade et est mange/prendre sa médécine. |
Le garçopn est malade et prend son médicament...
"Médecine" is not the good translation. It's the science of doctors (i don't know how to qsay in English).
| Quote: | | Des enfants joue dehors aussi. |
Des enfants jouent dehors aussi.
as it's plural...
| Quote: | | Il a un lit, une table de nuit, des jouets sur le placher et une fenêtre grande dans la chambre. |
Il a un lit, une table de nuit, des jouets sur le placher et une grande fenêtre dans la chambre.
French are used to put the adjectecive before the word... Most of the time.
Hope it's usefull
Reguards _________________ Semper Fidelem |
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Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:32 pm
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grammaire
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Thank you very much
A few small corrections:
Reguards=Regards
Hope it's useful (It would sound better to say "(I) hope this is helpful/(I) hope this is useful)
How do you say "Regards" in French? |
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Sun Jul 01, 2007 4:34 pm
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Marcus
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Thanks... I'm used speacking or reading English, but well, not writing
Regards in French could be translated by Tout mon respect .
Regards. _________________ Semper Fidelem |
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Sun Jul 01, 2007 6:23 pm
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grammaire
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Thank you very much
Regards |
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Sun Jul 01, 2007 11:22 pm
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